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    dots Submission Name: of Fiction...dots
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    Author: Black-Wall
    ASL Info:    19 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.81 - 60/85/48
    Words: 381
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Longing
    Total Views: 250
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2179



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       Dunno, tell me what you think about it. I wrote it on my way to school this morning. Watching the snow and what not.


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    Look close into my eyes, cold and clear as the fragments of ice come tearing down from the grey sky.
    Forever trust in the memories we say we are.
    Cant you see how close I hold this, this mask to my face.
    All my words cant say, and all was of fiction.

    Plunge deep into me you may find what you seek.
    If trust comes from love, and if agony comes from pain, why do you do what do. Why must this ice chill even the depths of my black heart.
    Forever trust in who we are, and the world falls back and shatters.

    Feel through the wind, a rise of warm air coming from a second chance. A love was spoken this day, two more loves fell to the grave.
    Pain I seek and I will find it soon, as I watch every day wondering who, will say trust matters.

    Look close into my eyes, cold and clear as the fragments of ice come tearing down from the grey sky.
    Forever trust in the memories we say we are.
    Cant you see how close I hold this, this mask to my face.
    All my words cant say, all was of fiction.

    Tragedy has spent its case, a lead kiss headed straight this way. All my words cant even come close to say, was the love between us, was the gaze that sent us over again. Was all of fiction?

    Close
    I hold my hand to yours, grasping the silent kiss. The cold reflections of winter seem to dig deep down louder. Cutting back my disgrace.
    Fallen
    My angel
    Taken from grace.

    all of fiction I see in you. Nothing more than a different view. Hold me back I dare you, cut my heart out. Cut it out

    Look close into my eyes, cold and clear as the fragments of ice come tearing down from the grey sky.
    Forever trust in the memories we say we are.
    Cant you see how close I hold this, this mask to my face.
    All my words cant say, and all was of fiction.

    Of fiction nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

    Of fiction ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

    Of fiction yeahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

    Forever trust in who we are, of fiction, all that matters....




    Submitted on 2005-12-06 15:49:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      The fragments of ice are they your soul? are they the facts within the fiction? I like the link between air and emotion. "Cut it out" nice line. I like the song.
    | Posted on 2005-12-06 00:00:00 | by Aruemos | [ Reply to This ]



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