i really can't relate and this didn't really seem like a poem to me. more like an angry outburst against the way this person and life in general has been treating u. u want to get away, but ur trapped.
this is such a huge outburst its more like a thought then a poem sometimes i feel the same. and i find myself saying this in the mirror! this actually makes me feel like crying because its like the worst thing being stuck in that kind role and very hard to get out of.
This poem has heart in it, and if you were in fact in that situation. I know how it feels and I understand that pain. Respect is a huge part of a relationship, if you don' t have that you do have anything at all. Good Luck in your writing.
not a poem really... but very cool. I'd be sick of being someone [censored] too... actually I dont think I'd ever really end up in that situation when I think about it... but oh well... I understand. Dont know how oyu feel... but I understand.
sad... not really very poetic but it could be with tweaking. it makes me sad though because ive been in that situation and its not a dandy one nope not at all. you should stand up for yourself. tell him you deserve to be respected. it kills me to sound so self-righteous because ill tell you the truth i didnt stick up for myself at all.
Submission Name: his bitch
