after time

Author: sickly Elite Ratio:    3.56 - 545 /537 /203 Words: 95

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after time

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after time i tell you that it's over we've got to be parting ways it's the end of those days real and nothing living is easy when no one is thinking it's getting hard that is oh can't you see, what it's doing to me? were you impressed? and how did you guess, the time of your execution? about to happen or become after death a thing to be a time to come it's over lived for years as and with just like a caged man but it's not quite right

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ok Im not into this kind of ryming cant realy understand it at all. whats tyhis mean execution?????????????realy I read it again and the ryhminmg dont stay the same u should try and ryme the same threw out the poem. Hey don't nock me see if u can do it. And make it flow its hard

| Posted on 2005-12-09 00:00:00 | by DrewDilla | [ Reply to This ]

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