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    dots Submission Name: Horizon Withindots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 61
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 639
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 542



    Description:
       Love,Peace,Joy~Know,Experience,BE~~~
    tif

    "Gideon's lamps were revealed when his soldiers' pitchers were broken. If our pitchers are broken for the Lord and His Gospel's sake, lamps will be revealed that otherwise would have stayed hidden and unseen...Out of affliction's dark comes spiritual light." John Bunyan in A Light For My Path


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    dotsHorizon Withindots
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    "IT" Dawned
    Within
    &
    tHE
    Light was
    my horiSon

    "Do not seek
    HEaven
    elsewhere
    or search
    for "IT"
    looking up
    to a place
    unseen...
    HEaven sees
    "IT"self
    within you
    A glorious
    Light."

    See the
    Horizon
    where
    the Light
    and the
    Darkness
    Meet
    in brilliant
    reflection...






    Submitted on 2005-12-07 13:26:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is a lovely inspirational poem. Very spiritual and a wonderful message conveyed with your words. It is so true, hope and faith comes from within just as our belief in God. We always think of the heavens as somewhere up in the sky, and when you think about it I kinda wonder why that is. Must be all the blue sky and clouds paint a serene picture and that angels fly and spirits rise...hmmm...yeah that must be it! Very lovely prose you have here. Dont have to look anywhere but from within! Nice job. Take care.

    Lorna
    | Posted on 2005-12-09 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]
      Inspirational, spiritual, and awe inspiring. Not much more needs to be said about this. A timely reminder for us all I feel.
    | Posted on 2005-12-08 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      you are so right, Tiff. heaven does lie within, the divine resides in our own hearts and souls. when we feel far apart from God, who moved, eh?..
    i just posted a journal entry about the horizon,
    where there is always hope and love.
    thanks for the reminder sweet lady!

    peace,
    ~Cat
    | Posted on 2005-12-08 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]
      Good on you for reminding everybody Tiff. Everybody looks up - to God, to Heaven, for Salvation...when all the time it's right there where they are.

    You do say it so well!

    be happy

    Graeme
    | Posted on 2005-12-07 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]


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