a bunch of spelling errors, 1st line musicians, 4th unreasonable, 12th line conceive, 13th line thoughts, 15th believe, i think there are a few others but I suck at english class so i'll just stop there. I felt I could connect with you when I read this piece. I agree with alot of what you said, but I don't think all music is lost, its just not as good as it once was. My personal fave music period was the seventies. Couldn't go wrong with a guitar back then. Now it is just about who makes the most noise, offend the most people, can push the line the furthest, not about talent and sound. This piece was really good however. I only would change the title. For two reasons. 1, you make no mention of emo kids. 2, it is all music that has dropped in quality
The flow of this piece was very good as well, just keeps going I guess. That's all i have to say. Nice write ! Metal Heart74
nicely done here - i can relate to this easily and i understand the title (i think) its been a while since i left the main stream music scene to follow indie musicians you still are in it for the love of music rather than ratings and money... i am a huge Ani Difranco fan (that may sound strange coming from a guy, but it is true) and i love the rest of the Righteous Babe Records people... indie music is great and about the music not the money... (i think that is what this was talking about, but correct me if i am wrong) anyways, great write, i enjoyed it... PEACE and LOVE, greg
Um... i kinda like it kinda dont. your gonna get alot of people saying you have spelling errors and that but dont listen to them my fave lines are: no room to believe in a higher power life has gone from sweet to sour i think thats the best bit of the poem! dont really get the title what does it mean??? anyway i would give this (cos im to lazy to vote) about a 4/5 its really good!