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    dots Submission Name: Thought for the daydots
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    Author: elephantasia
    ASL Info:    37/F/UK
    Elite Ratio:    3.54 - 398/490/159
    Words: 28
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
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    dotsThought for the daydots
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    Today is a wonderful day!

    Let go now of all the reasons why it isn't
    and focus on all the reasons it is.

    Enjoy your day!




    Submitted on 2005-12-08 04:27:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Aw, that's a nice message. There's a lot of negativity in the world (and on the site), and that makes this refreshing. Thanks for this, Amy
    | Posted on 2005-12-09 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]
      Well thanks for the short and sweet reminder. It started off foggy and now its just kick arse California sunshine!

    But then again, every day that I wake up with a pulse is a glorious day to me, hee-hee!

    Thanks!
    | Posted on 2005-12-08 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      What a great thought. I shall take your advise. Thank you. I hope your day goes well. This is a nice outlook for everyday. Thanks for sharing this.

    Maggie
    | Posted on 2005-12-08 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]
      Awe...that is sweet. Sometimes people do need to be reminded of the good things in life. Someone needs to snap their fingers and wake them up. We all get so busy with doing our routines that we fail to look out of that circle and see the things around us.

    Today is a good day.

    Thank you.

    Li Li
    | Posted on 2005-12-08 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]
      good message, but i dont always think having a wonderful day is that easy. i love having wonderful days and this message hits home for me, but remember some people might look at this advice and scoff. so maybe give some examples of how to look at the reasons why its a good day, force the reader to imagine them in their mind! then they won't just read your poem, but experience it as well! and isn't that why writers write, so that readers can read...and experience.
    | Posted on 2005-12-08 00:00:00 | by wherRutakingME | [ Reply to This ]
      This positive message needs to be repeated in our negative-oriented world. I could not agree more with it. It all depends on attitude and outlook.

    Good thought!
    | Posted on 2005-12-08 00:00:00 | by The Gadfly | [ Reply to This ]


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