Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Slit Skirtdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: roxygirl239
    ASL Info:    14/f/VA
    Elite Ratio:    3.39 - 450/305/44
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
    Total Views: 1235
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 592



    Description:
       HAHA! another english project. I'm sure my teacher wil lllllllloooooooooovvvvvveeeeee this one. lol. Yeah the topic was lsit skirts and i thought this would be funny.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsSlit Skirtdots
    -------------------------------------------


    Sheís like a
    Slit skirt
    Revealing all
    Everything sheís got
    All that you donít wanna see
    All that you
    Donít wanna hear
    Everything you donít wanna
    Reach out and touch
    Everything you donít want
    But youíd rather
    See her in a hot pink mini
    Looking like a slut
    (Somethingís hanging out!)
    And you stare
    Hand her your attention
    In a cloth bag
    How is that
    When you canít stand her other skirt?
    I get it
    The relationships not short
    Enough for you




    Submitted on 2004-04-25 14:03:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      I thought it was funny. You seem to have no problem saying whats on your mind. (That's good!) I liked this poem because it was very creative and it's something people don't really write about.
    Nice write!
    Jan,
    | Posted on 2004-07-02 00:00:00 | by Jan | [ Reply to This ]
      this is pretty cool. i liked it and i bet your teacher will to, ummm can't think of much else to say i like the hole skirt thing just awesome
    Crymson Pryncess
    | Posted on 2004-04-25 00:00:00 | by PryncessVynom | [ Reply to This ]
      sexy write and also funny...yeah i prefer minis
    over slits...i love a girl that can flaunt it..
    the sluttier the better, hehe...
    | Posted on 2004-05-01 00:00:00 | by pestiferous | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    8380

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.


    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry