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    dots Submission Name: how do you dodots

    Author: scardnscared
    ASL Info:    25/ DFW
    Elite Ratio:    3.1 - 585/498/311
    Words: 159
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
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    dotshow do you dodots

    im so far from where i thought i would be today
    im so far from anything
    and im ok with it, it seems.

    so long ago i set my self down a narrow path
    never knowing what each twist and turn had in store
    now when i look back i cant help but smile
    while the best memories pop out for a while.

    its not hard to keep a smile on my face anymore
    i find it so much easier then before
    it seems that my youth has surpased me
    but i grew up with in many stages
    i wouldnt pass it up to relive it but change it
    thats ok i learnt from my mistakes ill make it.

    its so uplifting it makes me want to cry
    its like i actualy did make it to where i wanted to go
    my life is a journey not a destination
    and i crossed the finish line.

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      this is really good. I like the ending.. that is how I would like to feel about my life.. sometimes I'm not too sure. and.. I'm a little confused. about this part :

    i wouldnt pass it up to relive it but change it
    thats ok i learnt from my mistakes ill make it

    are you saying that you wouldn't go back and change anything? I've been thinking about whatever mistakes I've made have led me to this point in my life.. and I wouldn't change them... I'm pretty happy with were I am.most of it. so. newho. I really did like this. I was just a little confused about that one part.
    | Posted on 2005-12-23 00:00:00 | by MyKemicalfailur | [ Reply to This ]
      I agree, I thought this was fab.

    i wouldnt pass it up to relive it but change it
    thats ok i learnt from my mistakes ill make it

    Great lines, kinda made me feel strong inside. I definitely connected with this. Brilliant. well done. Sugar xx
    | Posted on 2005-12-18 00:00:00 | by Sugar | [ Reply to This ]
      I agree. It was refreshing and made for a happy read. Perhaps you have found yourself a new niche here. It was very good and uplifting.
    | Posted on 2005-12-09 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      um...this kinda makes me think you at the end of your string the end of everything "my life is a journey not a destination
    and i crossed the finish line." wow...just...wow..this is an amazing work and it seems for a while you lost touch with the artist inside...now you got it back...kudos hunny..<3
    | Posted on 2005-12-08 00:00:00 | by Seedofbayne | [ Reply to This ]
      this is nice and refreshing to read. i love the last line! a very positve read and it's hard to find these kind lately here.
    great job. please write more like this. it made me feel happy!
    | Posted on 2005-12-09 00:00:00 | by MMISS | [ Reply to This ]

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