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in my room under the walls there is a fragile voice crying help me oh God covered in light i flee from the fright that someone in there could be stealing my tears so i run from the streets and the pale city lights always feeding my freight and its huge appetite And the hunt continues whereever i go with the voice in my room still going strong and the faster i run the voice runs along the fragile voice is now two screaming lungs ... run stupid run muscles pumping adrenalin jumping ... im in a movie an action-packed thriller where the old clichées and the lines are the same but the pain and the fright is perfectly clear if this was a comic my friends would be here but all that i hear is the voice from the walls screaming to God through the pipes of my ears slowly but steady the voice grows a face something familiar and then it hits me like a punch in the face the voice in the walls is a perfect reflection of my childhood days run stupid run |
I really enjoyed this piece, full of fear and aggression, very raw. You are very original with your work - dont ever lose that| Posted on 2005-12-09 00:00:00 | by Sugar | [ Reply to This ] | This one is quite an interesting read i liked it as it really portrayed your message i feel the emotion in this piece well done with the delivery of your imagery keep up the good work Timmy S. Edgar | | Posted on 2005-12-09 00:00:00 | by Timmy S. Edgar | [ Reply to This ] | |