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The Voice in The Walls


Author: caspian
ASL Info:    23/m/Denmark
Elite Ratio:    2.31 - 134 /189 /57
Words: 197
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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The Voice in The Walls



in my room
under the walls
there is a fragile voice crying help me oh God
covered in light i flee from the fright
that someone in there could be stealing my tears
so i run from the streets
and the pale city lights
always
feeding my freight and its huge appetite

And the hunt continues whereever i go
with the voice in my room still going strong
and the faster i run the voice runs along
the fragile voice is now two screaming lungs
...
run stupid run
muscles pumping
adrenalin jumping
...

im in a movie
an action-packed thriller
where the old clichées
and the lines are the same
but the pain and the fright is perfectly clear
if this was a comic my friends would be here
but all that i hear is the voice from the walls
screaming to God through the pipes of my ears

slowly but steady
the voice grows a face
something familiar
and then it hits me
like a punch in the face

the voice in the walls
is a perfect reflection
of my childhood days

run stupid run




Submitted on 2005-12-09 05:18:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I really enjoyed this piece, full of fear and aggression, very raw. You are very original with your work - dont ever lose that
| Posted on 2005-12-09 00:00:00 | by Sugar | [ Reply to This ]
  This one is quite an interesting read i liked it as it really portrayed your message i feel the emotion in this piece well done with the delivery of your imagery keep up the good work Timmy S. Edgar
| Posted on 2005-12-09 00:00:00 | by Timmy S. Edgar | [ Reply to This ]


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