next to me you lay by secret kisses

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Submission Name: next to me you lay dots

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Author:	secret kisses
ASL Info:	21/f/uk
Elite Ratio:	2.81 - 555/431/133
Words:	70

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
Total Views:	241
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	409

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next to me you lay dots

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let me take you on a ride,
a journey so far away.
where nights stay light,
there are only days after days.

let me fly you to the moon,
a journey so far away.
we can sit and watch the stars,
kiss under the milkyway.

let me come into your dream,
a journey so far away.
where you travel so far,
yet next to me you lay.

Submitted on 2005-12-09 05:29:33 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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This is gunna be added to the favorites list.I liked it alot,and can't really say much more about it.It was awesome. Good job.

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| Posted on 2006-02-11 00:00:00 | by ArtichokeMosher | [ Reply to This ]
I thought this was excellent. It was structured well, flowed and rhymed nicely and was written with style and real love in mind. I enjoyed it - well done.
| Posted on 2005-12-09 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]

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