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    dots Submission Name: next to me you laydots
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    Author: secret kisses
    ASL Info:    22/f/uk
    Elite Ratio:    2.81 - 558/438/138
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsnext to me you laydots
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    let me take you on a ride,
    a journey so far away.
    where nights stay light,
    there are only days after days.

    let me fly you to the moon,
    a journey so far away.
    we can sit and watch the stars,
    kiss under the milkyway.

    let me come into your dream,
    a journey so far away.
    where you travel so far,
    yet next to me you lay.




    Submitted on 2005-12-09 05:29:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is gunna be added to the favorites list.I liked it alot,and can't really say much more about it.It was awesome. Good job.

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    | Posted on 2006-02-11 00:00:00 | by ArtichokeMosher | [ Reply to This ]
      I thought this was excellent. It was structured well, flowed and rhymed nicely and was written with style and real love in mind. I enjoyed it - well done.
    | Posted on 2005-12-09 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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