it sounds like somebodys having a bad day(joking). I like the concept behind this write. Though i can't say i'm found of mutilation, it does greatly bother me when those who think they understand say it's purely for attention. It's distressing when that is said, so i can oonly guess as to how it would make the inflictor feel. I'd revise it, just some spelling/grammatical errors and maybe an antonym here and there. It reminds me of one of my pieces. A quick thought, in order to be forgotten you must first have remembered, you can't forget what you never remember hope things get better.