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    dots Submission Name: Opportunity is not a Mythdots
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    Author: screams
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       I decided to repost this for the purpose of supplimenting your high school history lessons...

    dont need to comment if you have already


    If you have any questions, feel free to ask...


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    dotsOpportunity is not a Mythdots
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    Horatio Alger fell off the ship
    into a textile mill
    feet bare
    he wove flags
    and Misses Smith's new dress

    And Rockefeller
    with a gleam in his eye
    gave dear Horatio
    a SHINY DIME
    and in ten years two!
    One for each eye
    as Alger's body hung limp
    on the factory line

    Draft Horses
    speak Itallian
    I dont know where
    her bare breast starts
    or the dirty baby ends

    Just a slather of thigh cream
    and white Ivory soap
    This girl will live her dream

    She'll die pure
    She'll die clean
    as she burns in the Triangle Shirt Waste Fire

    "Ebony Hands Polish Ebony Shoes"
    later sang the Harlem Boys Choir

    Pluck, Luck,
    and some medication
    when bodies are stiff
    they make great doors

    and defective is he
    who strangles himself

    pulling up his bootstraps

    because gravity should be defeated
    by strong arms.




    Submitted on 2005-12-09 22:44:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Ah, allusions, illusions, it's all the same surperbity. I'm too delirious or tired say anything more.
    Lovely.
    | Posted on 2006-01-17 00:00:00 | by Sipthefallensky | [ Reply to This ]
      This piece needs a home in print, in fact you should start submitting because your voice needs to be heard in the realtime world..

    love and en courage ment

    yer Nan
    | Posted on 2006-01-09 00:00:00 | by nansofast | [ Reply to This ]
      its beena while since i have read some of your ish...and well the knowlege seems to be continuing. some real poignant stabs at horatio alger, with your oh so cutting wit. the blending of fact with this fantastical melting of marginalized bodies is quite powerful. two strong lines that really work for me are:

    Draft Horses
    speak Itallian
    I dont know where
    her bare breast starts
    or the dirty baby ends

    She'll die pure
    She'll die clean
    as she burns in the Triangle Shirt Waste Fire

    "Ebony Hands Polish Ebony Shoes"
    later sang the Harlem Boys Choir

    the whole piece has a good lyrical quality...i feel like this should be taught as a sing along in all the middle and elementary schools across the nation. glad to know teh sociological imagination continues to thrive in your poetry.

    always a pleasure.

    chers from brazil,
    elliott
    | Posted on 2005-12-15 00:00:00 | by googie | [ Reply to This ]
      well ..Not being an american I can't remember having heard much at all about Horatio Alger. I must say I would love to have you as my history teacher though .. I think I would have enjoyed it much more in my high school days heh. So since I didn't really know who this author was I had to look him up ... realise there is a whole society dedicated to the man .. I feel like I should have heard of or know about this man earlier now that I see where and how much he is mentioned. ..but I guess that's the way it is when you come accross the supplementary reading before you have seen the body .. like a handfull of sparks without knowing where the flare is ..

    I was curious if yo uknow .. or ifyou could tell me what Hunter S Thompson had to say about him in fear and loathing in las vegas .. and what Moores opinion was in dude, where's my country .. From what I could read in a brief brushover .. Alger seemed like a person that repeated the story of how hard work needed a heroic deed to get anywhere .. very rough I guess .. but that's what I got out of what I read about him .. hope to hear from you soon .. thanks for an interresting look at american history. .

    much love,
    Christian
    | Posted on 2005-12-10 00:00:00 | by x-ianhoyskolt | [ Reply to This ]
      well ..Not being an american I can't remember having heard much at all about Horatio Alger. I must say I would love to have you as my history teacher though .. I think I would have enjoyed it much more in my high school days heh. So since I didn't really know who this author was I had to look him up ... realise there is a whole society dedicated to the man .. I feel like I should have heard of or know about this man earlier now that I see where and how much he is mentioned. ..but I guess that's the way it is when you come accross the supplementary reading before you have seen the body .. like a handfull of sparks without knowing where the flare is ..

    I was curious if yo uknow .. or ifyou could tell me what Hunter S Thompson had to say about him in fear and loathing in las vegas .. and what Moores opinion was in dude, where's my country .. From what I could read in a brief brushover .. Alger seemed like a person that repeated the story of how hard work needed a heroic deed to get anywhere .. very rough I guess .. but that's what I got out of what I read about him .. hope to hear from you soon .. thanks for an interresting look at american history. .

    much love,
    Christian
    | Posted on 2005-12-10 00:00:00 | by x-ianhoyskolt | [ Reply to This ]


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