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    dots Submission Name: What Lies...dots
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    Author: RyukiTZR
    ASL Info:    14/F/-
    Elite Ratio:    3.94 - 133/130/44
    Words: 176
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 345
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1268



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       This hasn't been put up much effort... Simply put, my brain's not working. Maybe I'm trying to put up being a wise-ass, I'm not sure myself...


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    dotsWhat Lies...dots
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    What lies between people,
    Is a depending promise of trust,
    Which falters in every action one dislikes...

    What lies between life and death,
    Is the possibility of soaking up pain,
    But otherwise not feeling a damn thing at all...

    What lies between the truth and false,
    Is something to wake up to,
    Or perhaps just to slip past…

    What lies between fingers,
    Is the ability to do anything within one’s whim,
    But is that not enough or too little?

    What lies in tears,
    Is the release of strangled feelings,
    The convince of what couldn’t be handled forever.

    What lies in love,
    Is what seemed undying,
    Until you wake up, its gone…

    What lies in loneliness,
    Is the longing desire of wanting,
    Yet more wanting to fade…

    What lies in dreams…

    Are mostly faltering promises,
    Numbed pain,
    Truths slipped away,
    Uncertain hands,
    Free-flowing tears,
    Rumbling hearts,
    And unreachable endless attention…

    But what lies in AND between poems,
    Is the poets’ heart-felt,
    And that’s what it all matters.




    Submitted on 2005-12-10 09:34:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I dont think it needs to be any longer... I really liked it alot! It totally made sense and...I just loved it! Nice Job!
    | Posted on 2006-06-19 00:00:00 | by broken angelz | [ Reply to This ]
      Fantastic! Its much better now. Im so so so glad you worked on it again. You have improved it 100%. Its so much deeper now. A very enjoyable read! xxx
    | Posted on 2005-12-12 00:00:00 | by Sugar | [ Reply to This ]
      Very thought-provoking, an enjoyable read. I think it's very well written - I wish it was a little bit longer - it seemed that just as I was getting into it - it ended.
    | Posted on 2005-12-10 00:00:00 | by Sugar | [ Reply to This ]



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