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    dots Submission Name: i never change,or have changeddots
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    Author: namesdontmatter
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 62/89/29
    Words: 174
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       bad bad person oh ill sing my song at the top of my lungs i am sill the same as a kid as i was before i grew up im a bad bad person


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    at th end of the world
    ill still be crying for myself
    because im too selfish to worry about everyone else

    ill still be worrying about what i cant do
    to do what i can
    the prayer of serenity
    i cant understand

    and there will still be someone there
    saying
    "you always think you know everything"
    but its so much the opposite
    its comical
    because i think i know less than anything
    i just think i know somethings they dont
    and thats not my fault

    at the end of the world
    ill still be screaming in my room
    wishing someone would knock and ask whats wrong
    but its not that they dont care
    they just cant hear me

    i will write a list of all the things i cannot change
    and all the things that make me cry
    and all the things in my dreams
    but i wont do a damn thing
    because thats just how i am
    put that at the top of my list





    Submitted on 2005-12-10 13:31:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This poem feels so frusterating, however i loved it especially the ending

    "i will write a list of all the things i cannot change
    and all the things that make me cry
    and all the things in my dreams
    but i wont do a damn thing
    because thats just how i am
    put that at the top of my list"
    | Posted on 2005-12-10 00:00:00 | by Darko | [ Reply to This ]
      wow,you said alot.i actually do write down the things that make me cry.& its good if you're a cutter or have some emotional damage.whenever you think the way you should deal with something by keeping it in,you should cry.-my personal advise(if you wanna call it like it is).
    Anywho,i love the way you kept going back to your room or yourself but going around to different thoughts like that they couldnt hear you & not that "they" dont care.
    Overall,so i dont keep talking on & on,i really liked the poem & the point of view.
    this one's a fav.
    _dancing_alone_
    | Posted on 2005-12-10 00:00:00 | by _Dancing_Alone_ | [ Reply to This ]
      alot of anger and pent up emotions/dreams.
    I know the feeling of having so much inside, and having no meaningful way of letting it out.
    its something that we sometimes have to live with.

    this was really nice, and I could feel the frustration.
    | Posted on 2005-12-10 00:00:00 | by marigold | [ Reply to This ]


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