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    dots Submission Name: Crystal Meth-Headdots
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    Author: kase
    ASL Info:    27, Winnipeg
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 169/398/234
    Words: 196
    Class/Type: Misc/Serious
    Total Views: 1048
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       There are too many of these guys walking our downtown streets. Sad.


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    dotsCrystal Meth-Headdots
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    bended pipes will sift, as the smoke travels inside the tunnels
    shattered ice within packages, that slowly pour down through the funnels
    add few drips of water, so the ventilation doesnt fumble
    invinsible after each breath, now the brain begins to tumble

    the heart beat speeds, reactions seem to apply much quicker
    your natural bullet proof vest, begins to feel much thicker
    from wild beeps to a solid flat line, your flame begins to flicker
    restlessness has caught up with you, now you need another kicker

    another inhale of chemical intake, seems to calm your fractured mind
    steadily you shake. deep inward breaths helps your system to unwind
    another cloud of sparkling crystals, has seemed to make you feel fine
    and even though its now day five, your body has accepted time

    one final rush is needed, now use a needle.. FUCK THAT PIPE
    find the vien and where it splits, one last shot to feel the hype
    the crystals melt and the puddle smokes, the pointed end stabs like a thousand knives
    the body functions steadily prepare, for that everlasting strife.
    your insides burst with energy, but then suddenly youre without life




    Submitted on 2005-12-10 19:27:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ya..I hang around people who do that...they are usually nice people though...don't be too quick to judge someone.
    | Posted on 2013-10-09 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]
      My Friend as I have told you before I was hooked on this stuff for 5 long years
    The tales of horror I could tell you
    You nailed it though my Friend
    My God you nailed this so Perfect
    I THANK GOD never used a needle in my life with my addiction that I had
    I just inhaled it through my nose
    Its now going on a year and a half that I have been free and clear from any drugs
    That [censored] almost killed me
    I went from 240 pds to 140 pds
    I almost died
    I Thank You so much for sharing this
    This is one hell of an important write that despertly needs to be seen by people before they choose to try this drug which in actuallity is commiting suicide
    God Bless
    INCREDIBLE JOB!!!
    I am making this a favorite!!!!
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-09-19 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      I thought this was really interesting. I just read a book called "Go Ask Alice" this reminded me of it. I liked the whole thing.. I've got nothing bad to say about it.

    the body functions steadily prepare, for that everlasting strife.
    your insides burst with energy, but then suddenly youre without life

    I love the ending... awesome job.
    | Posted on 2005-12-23 00:00:00 | by MyKemicalfailur | [ Reply to This ]
      This was very well done and I always say that I saw enough sunrises and sunsets in succession when I was young - and I've, too, seen what it can do to people.
    It's the drug of choice for all walks and you highlight the "buzz" and its effects quite well. It's hard to watch people suffer needlessly.
    Love,Peace,Joy~Feel,Experience,BE@@@
    tif =0
    | Posted on 2005-12-14 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      well i dont know anyone on meth right now, but i know where you are coming from...

    anyways this i a great write on a difficult subject (am i repeating myself from another comment?)

    i enjoyed and just wanted to say nice job...

    oh and welcome to ES... finally someone with a little skill who is newer than i am... that is awesome...

    PEACE and LOVE, greg
    | Posted on 2005-12-14 00:00:00 | by geherald | [ Reply to This ]
      well i use to do meth and cocain and i can tell you from experiance that its such a stupid thing to do i regret every time i took the tube in my nose or but a bunp on my pinky nail i mean it was great the numbing and all but i just couldnt forget those horible nights of feening for it and crying cuz some one left me do to them not being as important.

    well im sorry im just rambleing this was a fabulus write truely well ihave to go

    xoxo
    that girl

    ps. did you finish your half
    just wondering
    | Posted on 2005-12-10 00:00:00 | by sweet sorenity | [ Reply to This ]
      what a waste what a shame he was such a lovely boy-was a line from my favorite books... but it had nothing to do with this i was just reminded of it by what poetotoe said. anyways this was a good poem a little confsuing with all the words but that could just be the meth talking.. just kidding.
    | Posted on 2005-12-10 00:00:00 | by EEKS | [ Reply to This ]
      hi, what a waste, what a shame, "he body functions steadily prepare, for that everlasting strife.
    your insides burst with energy, but then suddenly youre without life" tom
    | Posted on 2005-12-10 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]


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