Don't Feel Great

Author: Poeticprincess ASL Info:    18/f/Germany Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 333 /325 /104 Words: 83

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Don't Feel Great

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For some reason I don't feel great anymore life has left an impression like a forever closed door don't really feel my rhymes although i think them all the time don't really wanna rep and i now really hate to step why? i don't know i told you i'm not sure it might be because you and me really don't talk anymore might be because i feel beyond myself or maybe just because i'm in love with someone else

Submitted on 2005-12-10 20:56:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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kinda understand, kinda confused, fully impressed. this one was pretty good. i think rhymes all the time. but i'm running outta [censored] to say. u on the other hand seem to be just be kicking flows due to this whole ex boyfriend thing

| Posted on 2005-12-12 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]

Love the last stanza. The top half of the poem was kind of cheesey. How could you be in love with someone else, if you felt great when you were with the other person? You got it? But good poem anyways. xoxoxo

| Posted on 2005-12-11 00:00:00 | by UNIQUEWOODS69 | [ Reply to This ]

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