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BTC


Author: Poeticprincess
ASL Info:    18/f/Germany
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Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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lol i don't know i just wrote this out of no where. I do have a group BTC. Which in the public eye stands for Beatiful Talented Chicas..it also stands for something else but that's a inside joke lol. The orignal members are me, Amber, and Tameka but since Meka moved it's a duet me and Amber. anyways someone told me it sounded like a freestyle. Not that i take this seriously but tell me what you think.


BTC



I'm running out of words
yet my thoughts keep going
talking up paper space
'cause the rhymes keep flowin
blowing up soon so watch out for me
and my new group BTC
we're beatiful, we're talented
we're off the chain
one day the crowds will be
screaming our names
it's such a shame
how bitches try to steal our fame
but i know the record deals will seek us
BTC, made up of me, Amber, and Meka




Submitted on 2005-12-11 20:57:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  this is ok...but I agree with troy that you could have taken more time to make it better...also you could right more verses to it...but its not bad
| Posted on 2005-12-18 00:00:00 | by maninthemirror | [ Reply to This ]
  does sound like a freestyle. it sounds like u wrote this in like 5 minutes. it's still good though cuz u pretty much somed up ur group and what it means to you. at least the first layer of it
| Posted on 2005-12-12 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]


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