[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav

  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav

    << | >>

    dots Submission Name: Understand the differentdots

    Author: StevenJay
    ASL Info:    21, Male, Chicago
    Elite Ratio:    3.41 - 27/36/14
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 821
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 677


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsUnderstand the differentdots

    Standing in the doorway lost in the moment
    You and I oblivious to the staring eyes
    Peering through us
    Trying to figure out how
    And why
    We were holding hands
    Smiling and loving every second of being different,
    Holding on to something special
    Holding on to that moment frozen in time
    I play it over and over
    Again and again waiting for another reaction
    Waiting to be the center of attention,
    Lost in what the eyes didnít say
    Lost among the whispers
    Trying to make sense
    Why we were smiling
    And loving every second
    Of being different.

    Submitted on 2005-12-12 01:00:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!

    ||| Comments |||
      i kind of like this poem, but i am trying to work how the person in this poem is different, is it because they are showing their love for another openly, which a lot of people don,t do,or is the person gay?you will have to let me know. interesting poem
    | Posted on 2007-01-28 00:00:00 | by bogeyman | [ Reply to This ]
      i liked it alot and i mean i would rather b different from everyone else bcuz the same old thing is boring..great write <33ash
    | Posted on 2005-12-12 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]
      I completely related to this. Its fabulous. Very enjoyable and easy to read. I applaud people for having the guts to be different, and I applaud you for turning that confidence into a great piece of work xx
    | Posted on 2005-12-12 00:00:00 | by Sugar | [ Reply to This ]
      umm... okay... I dont really get this... well... I mean I get it, but I dont really understand it... Does that make any sense??? It's about someone trying to figure out why they are so happy they're are different right??? Or am I completely off base??? well... anywayz I cant say I really liked it... because the point of it kinda slipped by me.

    | Posted on 2005-12-12 00:00:00 | by Drea | [ Reply to This ]

    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?


    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.




    User Name:


    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]

    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]

    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]