real good and unique ...emotions a re flowing well and relatable...only you can answer the questions you ask though and things will always get better...remember the corny line tis too shall pass...beleive it or not it is true...as many times in my life I've been in your place and thougt it would never canged but that one ting to make it all better sooner or later comes along and everyting is alright...the trick is do you have the strength to wait for it? You sould not have tis as untitled..you sould title it why? or I feel or something like that...just a suggestion
the answers to these questions are ones you may not want to find. what i like about this write is it shows how someone is confused and wants to solve the confusion but cant because the answers just cause more confusion. it was composed very well you get a 4. -brandon
I used to ask myself these questions a lot, too. I'm still searching, but not asking. So maybe if you stopped asking for a while and started searching... maybe that would do something. It certainly has for me.
Some of these questions I ask myself sometimes. This writing describes those questions deeply in the aspect of my heart and my mind. It's amazing that you could put them into words, but some people have a better talent at that then I do. Usually when people feel this way they look for someone to blame, and that I'm guilty of. Hope you go far with your writing/ poetry and good luck.
I think we will always be seeking answers, regardless of whatever stage of life we are in. and I believe that most of the answers, only we ourselves and not others, can seek them. this is a rather teenage angsty or venting sort of poem. not saying that it's bad or anything. jus hope that by writing this down, you feel better, even if it's jus a tad better.