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    dots Submission Name: the prayer for manydots
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    Author: stormkrow
    ASL Info:    20, Male, Michigan UP
    Elite Ratio:    2.59 - 51/50/38
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 254
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 338



    Description:
       THIS IS A POEM ABOUT VENTING AND AGAINST BUSH
    IF YOU CANT TELL
    SO BASH THE HELL OUT OF IT


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    dotsthe prayer for manydots
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    As we reaach this time of year again (christmas) all I can think about is all of our troups over seas and then i think who the fuck gave us permission to reak haveck on other people ??? but hey this is not as free a contry any more when you turn 18 off you go to get killed so i say lets pray for peace and not war
    any way ttul




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      i hate bush too but i think u could've done more with this. u shoulda put why bush sucks instead of just saying that he sux. anyway we're relatively free even though some of us are forced to go to war. many of the people in Iraq go of their free will and are proud to be able to fight for their country. yeah this isn't really much of a post. maybe this shoulda been a journal or something
    | Posted on 2005-12-13 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      oookay...this isn't really a popst that should be commented on...though, I will shamelessly comment, simply to raise my ratio...and dude, get soem facts before going Bush-bashing. more people will believe you.

    Go Bush!

    Storm
    | Posted on 2005-12-12 00:00:00 | by OrionsStorm | [ Reply to This ]


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