Ha! I've never heard it put quite so well. I felt that in my heart... oh... so... deeply. I have been such a sucker since my divorce... week after week falling for the empty flattery that I've been using to replace the love that's left a hole the size of Texas in my heart. And finally, that acceptance that it's all crap. It's all been said before... a big, blatant truth stated with simple finesse. Nice!
Such a powerful message in such few words. I really like this poem. It had a great flow to it. It speaks to me of the games people play and how once the game is recognized you don't fall for it again. What a great message. :) I truly enjoyed reading this poem and look forward to reading some more of your work.
ohh I like your poem. It was really short, the ending just, ended it. As it should be ended. Everything fit in nicely. I wouldnt change anything. Goodjob
Submission Name: Smooth words
