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    dots Submission Name: Fire Hurt Baddots
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    Author: Ratmeat
    ASL Info:    25/M/Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    3.33 - 200/222/61
    Words: 119
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 294
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    dotsFire Hurt Baddots
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    Masterbate to teen bop
    Young boy pin-up dart playing sicko fuck
    Power trip, gives you power load
    Putting power load in millions of clenched tubes
    Fucking muscle bound
    Fucking Self rightouse
    Fucking right rapist
    God loves you when you ram it in
    Ram it, penitrate the masses
    Laugh it down as the Lord high fives you
    And Jesus unwishes his birth
    With tears of two thousand years
    Pent up, now gushing like the great flood.

    "Could he share a strand of my hate? Of my love?"

    ..I would hug him
    as humans do some times
    in days of sorrow and escape
    ..I would make hime unwish
    his unwish
    Before my inevitable descend
    Before the end




    Submitted on 2005-12-12 23:37:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This poem is not one i particularly <sp. liked. I mean maybe you didn't mean it as a joke, but the way you layed it out made it seem like you were writing it to get a laugh. It seems to have a good point but i think you took it off to a bad beggining.
    | Posted on 2005-12-13 00:00:00 | by Fadeintoreality | [ Reply to This ]



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