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    dots Submission Name: *Memory*dots
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    Author: cannibal
    ASL Info:    18/f/MO usa
    Elite Ratio:    3.88 - 47/47/15
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       some memories are good and some are bad, but they all torment your mind in some way.


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    dots*Memory*dots
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    Mind boils over With the haunts of memories
    memories that creep
    memories that sleep
    trampling me down with each Thought I think

    And the sounds of the Words
    of the voices of the past
    and the creeping of the unknown
    stream through this small mind
    comes into these opened eyes
    shrieking through my mind
    leaving me with more sleepless Nights.




    Submitted on 2005-12-13 13:13:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      and then u hav dreams about memeories that r messed up
    some good some bad but they still keep me up at nite so very annoying
    i like ur first paragraph the hole haunting and creeping thing u put it in a nice way

    Darkness of the Grim Draco
    | Posted on 2005-12-13 00:00:00 | by darkness | [ Reply to This ]


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