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    dots Submission Name: Almost A New Yeardots
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    Author: ladiesplanet1
    ASL Info:    23.cali baby
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 720/463/165
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Poetry/The pain inside
    Total Views: 696
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    Bytes: 806



    Description:
       i wrote this for the world... so when i do actually kill myself i can say i warned you. i hope my life gets better but i have my doubts.


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    dotsAlmost A New Yeardots
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    The old yea ris leaving,
    Time to make new goals,
    Let's aim for changes,
    Let's try to fill wholes.
    Let's make up new dances,
    And remember old times,
    Let's try to be happy,
    And forget old crimes.
    Let's erase the past,
    And wipe our slates clean.
    We'll forget our grudges,
    And stop being mean.
    Let's cover our scars,
    And make something new.
    Let's meet a stranger,
    And say, "I love you!"
    Let's all be cheerful,
    Let's all run with glee.
    Forget all the bad things,
    And then forget me.
    It's almost a new year,
    i hope you're happy.
    So now good bye world,
    There's nop room for me.




    Submitted on 2005-12-13 14:14:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I've tried to kill myself 2x & it wasn't in God's plan for me but even with my bi-polar I am finding inner spirituality and using creativity to express and heal and change my outlook. I send you hugs & wishes for peace. Keep on, keepin on...bring your dreams to life
    love,peace,joy&smilez 2 share
    tif
    | Posted on 2006-01-31 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]


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