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    Author: sug90
    ASL Info:    14/F/U.S.A.
    Elite Ratio:    3.21 - 69/93/34
    Words: 167
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 225
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    One bright winter’s day,
    Just bright enough to show them the rain,
    The candy man came
    Delivering what was supposed to become it all,
    Become their one in everything,

    It suited the sick doctor’s cure
    But now they’re running out of moments
    To search for this miracle treatment
    It’s said to be in the no where
    Between the questions and answers
    Though they try so hard
    They can’t see the rainbow
    That came from all Your rain

    So they fake the shame
    Pretending it’ll be alright
    As soon as they pass their blame
    It’s their only anesthetic
    That makes it worth the fall
    And still tastes like pesticide
    Filling the world up till
    It’s all empty inside
    Promising something
    Prescribing more pain

    So coat it all in sugar and spice and everything nice
    With the taste tested lies
    Because a spoonful of sugar allows it to go down
    How did candy coated apple
    Become what takes us all down?




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