This had an old-timey, sing songy feel to it and I liked the style. I particularly liked, "Dreams have gone out With the tree New Years Garbage; Faked belief." That was like a little poem within and it has much truth! Love,Peace,Joy~Feel,Experience,BE! tif
Hey I'll not pretend that I understand this because I don't, lots of the content here paint a picture of a prostitute whose none to chuffed with life, am I even close?
Paradox flocks the Open aim
Clear shot to rot And plot the blame.
This sounds great, but if you could clarify it that would be good because I think this is just too damn clever for a simple yorkshire lad like myself. my ignorance aside, for the time being. This is all quite well structured and each line rolls easily into the next, so I like it. Just got figure out what it's saying.
This is a really pretty write I loved this The style you wrote this in is very different But this still carries a steady flow Very Nice Write Your Friend Ron And also thank you for pointing out some of my spelling mistakes I quickly corrected them And I am Honered by the addition Race Of A Lifetime to your favorites list Thank You I will be looking for more posts from you Ron
Your style reminds me of like Jewel or someone like that...you write with a female mind...you are a romantic soul and it shows...seems like you have a thing fir december too,lol. This was a really good piece...you really are talented...I am becoming a fan.
Hmm. makes one truly think. In order to understand what's behind it, you have to read it a few times, and then you're still left guessing. Says something perhaps along the line of a heart that's had enough and finally decides to fight back...despite of any pain it will endure...and still holds on to the knowledge that life will all be good again. Amazing.