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    dots Submission Name: Role Play Friendsdots
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    Author: josymanthegreat
    ASL Info:    21/m/GA from Puerto Rico
    Elite Ratio:    4.73 - 337/364/104
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 761
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    Bytes: 584



    Description:
       Just something I felt like writing to describe some friendships


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    dotsRole Play Friendsdots
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    Hello, they always say
    And hello, you repeat
    The other words go stray
    A different day the same feat

    The same he said, she said
    Evil two headed snakes
    Waiting for something to begin
    So they can spread it like a disease

    Call themselves buddies
    Tell you that the relationship won't change
    But when your back is turned
    Here comes their other face

    Stab you in the back
    As Brutus did Ceasar in
    Those Role Play Friends
    Laughing leaving you to never believe




    Submitted on 2005-12-13 18:17:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Ha! Isnt this so very true! I hear ya all day long on this one. Doesnt it suck when you realize someone you thought was a friend turns out to be this way? I have been there and I know it really [censored] sucks! I like this short little poem. It says so much without saying SO much! And it is all true too! The only good thing about this kind of experience is the knowledge you gave from it. It makes you more aware for the future and you begin to pick up on these types before you vest too much time on them. I have learned to spot them right away with certain little hints you pick up on and then I...RUN! haha! These kinds of people aint worth the time or the nonsense that comes along with them. Very good write. Take care.

    Lorna
    | Posted on 2005-12-14 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey Man, i read it twice because their are a quite a few things to get out of it. I like that. And you chose the perfect words and also got it in some rhyme scheme i liked that, i admire those skills in you man. One of my more favorite I've read so far. Take Care. cool pic too.
    | Posted on 2005-12-13 00:00:00 | by PoetPhilosopher | [ Reply to This ]
      Sounds like you've faced a heavy dose of hypocrisy lately; enough to convince you that friends are a rare commodity and superficial acquaintances breed like bunnies (or rats) with the rabid need to cause as much suffering as possible before they die. Stay close to those you can trust and shed the rest like two headed snakeskin. Straightforward and honest write. Nicely done.
    | Posted on 2005-12-13 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
      i like this! how can no one comment on this this is great! ive had friendships like that! actually a lot like that! they act one way but as soon as u turn ur bak! u get hurt!good joB! u captured this well!
    ~akaila evonne~
    | Posted on 2005-12-13 00:00:00 | by iluvpoetry_1 | [ Reply to This ]


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