Ha! Isnt this so very true! I hear ya all day long on this one. Doesnt it suck when you realize someone you thought was a friend turns out to be this way? I have been there and I know it really [censored] sucks! I like this short little poem. It says so much without saying SO much! And it is all true too! The only good thing about this kind of experience is the knowledge you gave from it. It makes you more aware for the future and you begin to pick up on these types before you vest too much time on them. I have learned to spot them right away with certain little hints you pick up on and then I...RUN! haha! These kinds of people aint worth the time or the nonsense that comes along with them. Very good write. Take care.
Hey Man, i read it twice because their are a quite a few things to get out of it. I like that. And you chose the perfect words and also got it in some rhyme scheme i liked that, i admire those skills in you man. One of my more favorite I've read so far. Take Care. cool pic too.
Sounds like you've faced a heavy dose of hypocrisy lately; enough to convince you that friends are a rare commodity and superficial acquaintances breed like bunnies (or rats) with the rabid need to cause as much suffering as possible before they die. Stay close to those you can trust and shed the rest like two headed snakeskin. Straightforward and honest write. Nicely done.
i like this! how can no one comment on this this is great! ive had friendships like that! actually a lot like that! they act one way but as soon as u turn ur bak! u get hurt!good joB! u captured this well! ~akaila evonne~