HATE
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I turned it into a song... i know it doesnt ryme but it is a pretty good song... Its really loud though.lol.
HATE
Im sick of your lying and calling me a liar I through with your minipulative wayz Im tired of your constant disaproval The sound of your voice Just like the thought of you make me sick to my stomache Just to be in the same room with you can drive me crazy To put it plainly, I hate you I really really hate you from the bottom of my heart I hate you with every breath I breathe I hate you with ever inch of my soul I hate you with every tear I cray I hate you I hate you, I hate you, I hate you. with every cell in my body evey hair on my head every ant on the ground every cloud in the sky I hate you I cant even focus anymore I hate, I hate you, I hate you. |
Submitted on 2005-12-14 03:03:14 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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I also liked the flow of this poem too, at least you got straight to the point and let your readers know how much you hated this person. Well, i liked it and maybe a couple synonyms for "hate" would be a nice change in the poem, but other then that i think its a really expressive poem. Keep it up <3 I feel ya| | Posted on 2006-04-04 00:00:00 | by Dreamy Demise | [ Reply to This ] | wow, there is a lot of hate in this poem. Im not exactly sure if it is healthy to hate someone to this extent, but if this poem is just a way to get out some anger, i suppose it is okay. the poem has a good flow to it, although the repetitiveness is a little annoying at times. but otherwise it is a good poem. | | Posted on 2005-12-14 00:00:00 | by nephthys | [ Reply to This ] | WOW very hate full. You realy tell someone that u hate them when u hate them. hey my stuff not hatred but some is go check out my stuff please. | | Posted on 2005-12-14 00:00:00 | by DrewDilla | [ Reply to This ] | |
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