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Author: Drea
ASL Info:    18/f/nowhere
Elite Ratio:    3.79 - 289 /142 /53
Words: 150
Class/Type: Lyrics /I hate you
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I turned it into a song... i know it doesnt ryme but it is a pretty good song... Its really loud


Im sick of your lying
and calling me a liar
I through with your minipulative wayz
Im tired of your constant disaproval
The sound of your voice
Just like the thought of you
make me sick to my stomache
Just to be in the same room with you
can drive me crazy
To put it plainly,
I hate you
I really really hate you
from the bottom of my heart
I hate you
with every breath I breathe
I hate you
with ever inch of my soul
I hate you
with every tear I cray
I hate you
I hate you, I hate you, I hate you.
with every cell in my body
evey hair on my head
every ant on the ground
every cloud in the sky
I hate you
I cant even focus anymore
I hate, I hate you, I hate you.

Submitted on 2005-12-14 03:03:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I also liked the flow of this poem too, at least you got straight to the point and let your readers know how much you hated this person. Well, i liked it and maybe a couple synonyms for "hate" would be a nice change in the poem, but other then that i think its a really expressive poem. Keep it up <3 I feel ya
| Posted on 2006-04-04 00:00:00 | by Dreamy Demise | [ Reply to This ]
  wow, there is a lot of hate in this poem. Im not exactly sure if it is healthy to hate someone to this extent, but if this poem is just a way to get out some anger, i suppose it is okay. the poem has a good flow to it, although the repetitiveness is a little annoying at times. but otherwise it is a good poem.
| Posted on 2005-12-14 00:00:00 | by nephthys | [ Reply to This ]
  WOW very hate full. You realy tell someone that u hate them when u hate them. hey my stuff not hatred but some is go check out my stuff please.
| Posted on 2005-12-14 00:00:00 | by DrewDilla | [ Reply to This ]

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