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    dots Submission Name: To da Hatersdots
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    Author: Drea
    ASL Info:    18/f/nowhere
    Elite Ratio:    3.79 - 289/142/53
    Words: 255
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 890
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1217



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        I dont know just kind ticked cuz peoplez from my hood is hatin and peoplez in the good hood hatin, and this white bitch with her confederate flag T-shirt wanted to start #### today so I wrote bout it (after I kicked her azz).lol. Umm... It doesnt have a chorus. So.. I guess it's not really a song so much as just a verse.


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    dotsTo da Hatersdots
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    Tired Of people smilin up in my face, but the minute I turn around they got so much to say. If you dont like me stop actin like you do. Hey, you might even find out, I hate you too. I dont care if you like me or my friends, and I dont care If you approve or diss the way I live. You cant judge me you aint walked in my shoes. You dont got a clue bout what I been through. You dont know what its like to be scared to go home, to always be alone, To be scared to pick up the phone... cuz you dont know if they callin to say, if your momz gettin evicted today. You dont know what its like to cry tears every night until you get older and ask yourself WHY... Why doesnt anyone want me, mommy explain to me... whats an OD, Why doesnt daddy some to see me, Oh and mom whats a confederate flag, and why does that man have them all over his Jag??? See you dont know what it like to be me, runnin up the street tryin to duck police, robbin the 7-11 runnin away from Devin, ever since he got caught up he been hittin us up.. for cash, Man Devin can kiss my ass. I so sick of this trash. Even when you get up out the hood peoplez is still hatin, discriminatin, incriminatin. The only thing I can do is to just stick to my roots.




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      I like this. It sounds to me like this person lives in the slums maybe and has all the people around him judging him for it. I would consider putting it into a better form though. Maybe to where it rhymed better.
    | Posted on 2005-12-14 00:00:00 | by asianprincess06 | [ Reply to This ]
      OD? that's an overdose if u don't know. well that's what i think. where do u live? i hate racist people. that confederate flag [censored] is completely outta line. i think u shoulda organized this differently

    If you dont like me stop actin like you do.
    Hey, you might even find out, I hate you too.
    I dont care if you like me or my friends,
    and I dont care If you approve or diss the way I live.
    You cant judge me you aint walked in my shoes.
    You dont got a clue bout what I been through..
    etc.
    | Posted on 2005-12-14 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      hum well writen. A diffrent view but still means same basic thing. whats an OD???????????????I don't know what it is please tell
    | Posted on 2005-12-14 00:00:00 | by DrewDilla | [ Reply to This ]


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