Description: This is a poem I wrote awhile go. Go head and comment, I love hearing how I cna improve my writing.
The Thoughts Of A Dying Girl -------------------------------------------
welcome you to this life of confusion
Born into a world of hatred
Living a angry painful life
Saying things that shouldnít be said
Hiding feelings that should be shown
Dreaming of happiness
Tired of crying over stupid things
Hoping that someone is listening
Running into Problems everywhere
Facing Troubles everyday
Wondering why people would want to hurt me
Making enemies every time I turn my back
Sick of loving people that I cant have
Watching people suffer
Stuck inside this bubble
Lost and deprived of anything that really matters
Lives have been Ruin
Pain has been delivered
Anger is all around
Trying to forget
Forgetting that I once Loved
Helping people for nothing
Giving all I can
Do you see what is happening?
Do you see what youíre doing to me?
I canít handle this life much longer
I'm sick of people putting me down
I despise this hatred
Wishing that one day you'll see me
Knowing that I'm alone doesnít hurt
Knowing that you hate me hurts more
Time might change things
Hoping that one-day everything will be ok
Sick of everything
One-day peace will come my way
I am not going to let you get to me
My feeling have been shattered to many times
I donít really care anymore
Why do you hurt me so much?
Why is it me that you bug?
Donít you see that youíre hurting me?
Itís done already
I canít change the Past
I can only wish that the future will be different
Sorry for the things that Iíve done
Sometimes life can leave you feeling dead inside and this piece shows the echo of loneliness and tired expectation. I liked the lack of punctuation and it was a little hollow feeling which actually helps the theme of the piece, I believe, in this instance. You can't change the past but you have the now to do with whatever you want. Love,Peace,JOY~Feel,Experience,BE! tif