Description: Listening to old CCR (Credence) and I took a random comment sheet from one of my ES poems and was inspired to "spit IT", if you will....<@> added a drawing in pen that wound, with the words, around the page.
It was fun to write and me oh my...endings up in "IT"....he he he
Enjoy Life and Merry Christmas ~
Love,Peace,JOY ~ Feel,Experience,BE!!!
Walkin Halo Talkin SHE "IT" -------------------------------------------
Talkin Shit +)
Yeah, ALL "IT"
if you want
or a toke in
a pill &
the world's in
pain & havin
Politic with religion
most in their
Mideastern a Brit
it's your turn
2 lay down
our turn 2 sit
The tear at the
split - - -
on TIT (*) (*)
Left says swallow
right 2 spit?!
ALL Basic ~
2 Quit -->
how i can read something so... (oh what the hell's the word for it?) unique(?), and feel like i've read a novel? got to come back to your page soon, you've got a lot of posts, and i take forever to write one friggin comment. but not to worry, eventually... peace out.
Okayyyy, bit different than the normal (?) Tiff writing we usually see. It's nice to venture out. You did good. You even caused my brow to rise in parts of this write, and a slight giggle. You got it going on in this write. I'll leave the political comments out. I don't usually get into those. But you have quite of way of doing so yourself..
Thank you so much. I wondered why the rap didn't get many comments. I guess because it's reality. I never seen a rap or rhyme writting in your style or flow. I truly understand where you are coming from and the political stand point. Your rhymes were brief and to the point. My hat is off to you on this one. Like ricky said in boys-n-the hood but rephrased. Your rhymes has more cakes than duncan hines.
Haha! hee hee! Ohhh, geez I found this to be so much fun! This is a bit different from what I usually read from you and may I say, thanks for the smile!
Sunrise cock in hand needy mouth on TIT (*) (*) Left says swallow right 2 spit?!
Ok...I think that just about sums it up dontcha think? hahahahahaaaaaaaaaaaaa! This is like a rap song with erotic, explicit content hee hee! You have been officially banned from Walmart! hahahaa! Thanks for puting a smile on my face with this one. haha! Take care!
Umm...did I ever say, nice TITs, hee-hee! Yeah, I can see this here as an echo of spiritually Ragin'A.T.M. yet not enough to slaughter it from total existence because IT needs the 'US'(A) to survive despite its despise of "IT". Funny how the more you seem to describe "IT" the more people 'claim' to know of "IT" and be in "ITS" existence, but after a period of time you realize they just dont get "IT". Hee-Hee...lil goodness she-devil you are...and thats a rarity.
this is really unique. i havent seen a verse written in this style before, and by reading the name i didnt really understand what it was going to be about, but after finishing it i can understand. oh and thanks for reading my piece. but yea keep it up
heya this is deeeefinitely different. i liked the morning sex scene cuz that is my morning just about every day... lmao. but the style is different, i did something similar a while back but i lost it, so i guess that doesnt count, huh?
This is IT I think i understand the capitols for IT now Extremely Clever You are very talented I really enjoyed reading this I will definately without a doubt be looking for your clever mind In future writes God Bless Your Friend Ron