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    dots Submission Name: god's painful heartdots
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    Author: papalegba
    ASL Info:    45/male/schenectady ny
    Elite Ratio:    3.78 - 52/42/28
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsgod's painful heartdots
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    there is an old person that lives
    somewhere above
    the place of indifference
    looking down or over
    to find the answer
    of the hate
    not turning the other cheek
    but using the good word
    to justify their own means
    praise be to those who worship war
    and to the killings in the chamber
    sing praise to our atoms
    glorify our gasses
    kill those that may or may not kill us first
    do not let them have anything to defend themselves
    for they may hurt us
    blessed be the war our god
    of the bushes
    amen




    Submitted on 2005-12-14 15:16:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I like this. It has some minor spelling errors though. Useing-using, a old-an old, cheeck-cheek. It is fascinating the way you veiw humanities worship of god. how they worship hatred and violence. It reminds me of how humans waste their lives sitting in front of the television worshipping the simulated violence.
    Briannan
    | Posted on 2005-12-14 00:00:00 | by Briannan | [ Reply to This ]
      This is one heck of an interesting write
    Im not sure but I believe you wrote this sarcastically to wake up people to the dangers that lie ahead if we dont wake up and start changing things
    I liked this
    Great Job!
    Your Friend
    Ron
    | Posted on 2005-12-14 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]


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