The Knowledge which you Seek
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Well this is writtem for my lil bro. Uthmaan.
what can i say. I come from a family full of power hungry maniacs.
what can i say. I come from a family full of power hungry maniacs.
The Knowledge which you Seek
The Knowledge which you seek is useless, never-ending it blackens thy soul and kills thy heart The wielders of this knowledge are only the cruel, evil like despots power hungry in their cause dominating as ever The evil they do cannot be stated an eye for an eye a soul for a soul their thoughts so cold DO NOT let thy curiosity prevail thee for the knowledge which you seek is harmful, corrupting in thy mind becoming in thy soul separating families masdaral lil ithim the source of sin My curiosity succumbs me please tell me so why Oh why would they do such an evil thing?!!? The knowledge which you seek i shall not tell thee for it is a burden to carry harmful, as its consequences are dire brought to this world as a trial a test their jelousy so strong their ways so vile O I shall kill them so... Please do not desire so close thy eyes and let it go mention thy Lord He'll ease thee from this horrid plight My heart is at rest but I still need to know exactly who and why....... |
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Kool. But i am not a power hungry maniac. Maybe a future evil despot. | | Posted on 2007-01-16 00:00:00 | by Uthmaan | [ Reply to This ] | DUDE I LOVE THIS PART SOOO MUCH : | DO NOT let thy curiosity prevail thee for the knowledge which you seek is harmful, corrupting in thy mind becoming in thy soul separating families masdaral lil ithim the source of sin It is soooo true because we all want to know things and we all want to have a part or have apiece of the knoledge that this Earth hold but not all of it is for the good. We all feel like that... you know? It's kinda weird how we want to know what is not good for us. < Unperfect 3 | Posted on 2005-12-27 00:00:00 | by UnPerfect | [ Reply to This ] | I LIKE THIS ONNNNE. Mannn woman, i lubbb your poems cuz they're so different from the way others write their poems. It rocks, yo. | You said it was about magic, but it could really be anything you want it to be. WOW! GO YOU!Hahahahahahah. | Posted on 2005-12-24 00:00:00 | by GiveMeTheGun | [ Reply to This ] | This is a terrific write and I love the opening. Normally I’m not fond of archaic language but as an imaginary dragon it suits your style well. The misuse of power seems to be prevalent at the moment. George Bush springs to my mind. I’m not sure if there are typing errors or deliberate defiant spellings. I’ll go with the first and you can let me know if I’m wrong. Spelling corrections in brackets. | The Knowledge which you seek is useless, (never-ending) it blackens thy soul and kills thy heart. The (wielders) of this knowledge are only the cruel, evil like despots power hungry in their cause (dominating) as ever. I wouldn't bother with 'the' and 'like' The (wielders) of this knowledge are only cruel, evil despots The evil they do cannot be stated an eye for an eye a soul for a soul their thoughts so cold DO NOT let thy curiosity prevail thee for the knowledge which you seek is harmful, corrupting in thy mind (becoming) in thy soul (separating) families masdaral lil ithim I don’t understand this line. the source of sin My curiosity succumbs me please tell me so why Oh why would they do such an evil thing?!? The knowledge (which) you seek i shall not tell thee for it is a burden to carry harmful, as its (consequences) are dire brought to this world as a trial a test their (jealousy) so strong their ways so vile O I shall kill them so Please do not desire so close thy eyes and let it go mention thy Lord He'll ease thee from this horrid plight My heart is at (rest) but I still need to know exactly who and why... Please stay in touch Comradenessie | Posted on 2005-12-16 00:00:00 | by comradenessie | [ Reply to This ] | WHOA, that is all I have to say...WHOA! I'm adding this to my favorites. Definately my kind of write, lol. This was really good and your flow was awesome. Keep it up! | | Posted on 2005-12-14 00:00:00 | by Toxic_Rayne | [ Reply to This ] | |
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