DUDE I LOVE THIS PART SOOO MUCH : DO NOT let thy curiosity prevail thee for the knowledge which you seek is harmful, corrupting in thy mind becoming in thy soul separating families masdaral lil ithim the source of sin
It is soooo true because we all want to know things and we all want to have a part or have apiece of the knoledge that this Earth hold but not all of it is for the good. We all feel like that... you know? It's kinda weird how we want to know what is not good for us.
This is a terrific write and I love the opening. Normally Iím not fond of archaic language but as an imaginary dragon it suits your style well. The misuse of power seems to be prevalent at the moment. George Bush springs to my mind. Iím not sure if there are typing errors or deliberate defiant spellings. Iíll go with the first and you can let me know if Iím wrong. Spelling corrections in brackets.
The Knowledge which you seek is useless, (never-ending) it blackens thy soul and kills thy heart.
The (wielders) of this knowledge are only the cruel, evil like despots power hungry in their cause (dominating) as ever.
I wouldn't bother with 'the' and 'like'
The (wielders) of this knowledge are only cruel, evil despots
The evil they do cannot be stated an eye for an eye a soul for a soul their thoughts so cold
DO NOT let thy curiosity prevail thee for the knowledge which you seek is harmful, corrupting in thy mind (becoming) in thy soul (separating) families
masdaral lil ithim I donít understand this line.
the source of sin
My curiosity succumbs me please tell me so why Oh why would they do such an evil thing?!?
The knowledge (which) you seek i shall not tell thee for it is a burden to carry harmful, as its (consequences) are dire brought to this world as a trial a test
their (jealousy) so strong their ways so vile O I shall kill them so
Please do not desire so close thy eyes and let it go mention thy Lord He'll ease thee from this horrid plight
My heart is at (rest) but I still need to know exactly who and why...