Description: when i was in high school I took a myth class and read in one of the books about these women who were under a gods spell and they danced, sang, killed beasts untill some god (i don't remember the name of these people it was long ago.) punished the god who cast a spell on the women. Yeah looong discription I know.
it is a little strange but that doesn't matter. You use the word beast a little to much, and it doesn't really seem to have any clear direction. But i think that if you modifyed it a little and maybe added on to the end than it would be much more effective, but it shows some promise. ~Shadow sorry to be so brutal, but i am just trying to help.