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    dots Submission Name: questionsdots
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    Author: bluecrane
    ASL Info:    19/F/WASHINGTON
    Elite Ratio:    3.61 - 70/83/26
    Words: 85
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 1063
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 515



    Description:
       i dont know, i still have writers block, and i'm trying to use a different approach.


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    dotsquestionsdots
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    it's good to finally talk to you
    see i've been waiting for your reply
    to the questions i had asked so long ago

    if you don't mind i have just a few more
    why didn't you talk to me
    when i decided to do this?

    why did i not get comfort
    when i needed you the most?
    where were you?

    if you could just answer those without hesitation
    i'll leave you be, and never bother you again
    on my trip to hell




    Submitted on 2005-12-14 23:45:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really do'nt see anything in this. I have know clue as to what you mean at all. Writers blocks sucks, keep experimenting.
    | Posted on 2005-12-15 00:00:00 | by Sethesin | [ Reply to This ]
      wow for someone with writers block this is great. even though it is a little short it shows so mush through it especially the ending line. i love how easy it starts out then how it just hits the reader, in this case being me lol, anyway thx for the read and i'm adding this to my fave. list,thx again,

    brandon
    | Posted on 2005-12-15 00:00:00 | by disturbedx1000 | [ Reply to This ]


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