...um i think these fine folks got this poem all wrong. mabye im wrong who knows but... i thought the write was describing a horrible absence of something inportant. i dont think its love for the writer but rather love and caring in the world. i think this was an example of someone hiding from the pain of the world, and u used the garden as a way to entertain the idea of withdrawl from the negitivity but the seclusion destroyed the writer the same way the world would have. the fantasy element was astounding. great write...i hope im not the one who misinterpreted it. lol -sun/justiin
I liked the last verse. I'll probably think of why later, at the most annoying time, but it made me think of all those artists, who when alive were a mockery or ignored, were considered genius in their art when they died. I like your poetry.
That's so pretty. I love it. The imagery and stuff is excellent. Very creative. I have a lot of favorite parts, so I won't point them all out. I would comment better, but it's laundry time Beautifully done
I don't understand the write perfectly *contradict plainly* To me, it seems like you're a person who cannot find her way out of her shell, who is trapped within one's self and is struggling to find a way out. o_o I liked how it didn't rhyme at all. xD -Mi
In my opinion this is a good piece of work. I am a very liberal writer, i believe in structure, but lean more towards passion, so it is hard for me to find fault with a piece of work that shows passion.
I understand this write perfectly You are longing to find Love and understanding with the World but barriers keep popping up stopping you from moving forward I believe the secret to prevent those barriers from appearing is Positive Energy Stay Positive I will be looking for more of your writes God Bless Ron