Friendless by Meckes

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Submission Name: Friendless dots

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Author:	Meckes
ASL Info:	18/M/NJ
Elite Ratio:	5.66 - 137/120/37
Words:	138

Class/Type:	Lyrics/Misc
Total Views:	221
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	1118

Description:
Written partly about a girl and partly about my life in general... It's about my struggle with MD and my suicidal tendencies and then there are parts about my breakup with my girlfriend/best friend...

Friendless dots

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I'm just a...
two week psychopathic
mortal sinner
Bleed me dry
with your sharp-tongued
sardonic razor
Blank canvas
In my solitude
I wait for life
renewed by you

And I'm
two faces of drama
in a pale shell
Pendulum-
swing forever in Hell
Unwritten
In my solitude
I wait for life
renewed by you

We're just
nothing, nothing
Friendless forever

And we're
nothing, nothing
lovers for never

Pill bottle and love letter
Mark my early grave
Ashes to ashes
to your beaten slave

(Two week, too weak)

(Two faces... one shell)

Two faces of a sinner
Redemption in your eyes

We're
nothing, nothing
Friendless forever

We're
nothing, nothing
Lovers for never

Pill bottle, love letter
In my solitude
I wait for life
renewed by you

Submitted on 2005-12-15 15:02:45 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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||| Comments |||
Man this is so strong... and wow... I don't know what to say... I really can't relate to this, besides the thoughts in my head.. But that is simply nothing compared to this.. Yes there are times I'm sure lots of us feels like this way... a way to act... but I'm sorry you had to go through this or struggle through this. It must have been really tough. I can't imagine.

You did a good job with expressing your feelings out.. Good Work

Stephanie
| Posted on 2005-12-16 00:00:00 | by XxStephyxX04 | [ Reply to This ]
Sounds as if you've crossed paths with a near fatal relationship and the volatile aftermath of the breakup (near breakup?). I'm guessing the multitude of personal problems you relate in the description have opened up some canyon- size potholes in your path to happiness with your significant other. This was much more expressive than similar writes I've come across on this site; a sort of twisted desparation in the form of a suicide note/love letter combo. Nicely done. Take care. Bill.
| Posted on 2005-12-15 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]

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