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    dots Submission Name: Love Never Diesdots
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    Author: tinkerbellsas
    ASL Info:    22/f/ny
    Elite Ratio:    3.33 - 67/66/32
    Words: 139
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 684
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    Description:
       People just don't completely fall out of true love in a day!!!


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    dotsLove Never Diesdots
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    How do you do it?
    You just walk away
    Feeling no hurt nor pain
    How do you make the love die?
    How do you say good bye
    Without a tear in your eye?

    Please teach me how
    How you don't even feel
    The way you just turn away
    How you make the love go away
    You just move on without explanation
    Never turning to look back

    How can you say you don't love me?
    Love isn't a momentary thing
    It lasts forever if it's true
    Through good and bad
    Love comforts you
    It makes you feel alive

    Wait, now I know how you did it
    True love never dies
    But your love for me did
    You never loved me in the first place
    Your lies and stories are what died
    Your love was never even alive




    Submitted on 2005-12-15 15:54:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i love this poem it just flowed to me as i read it until the last stanza. something missing or just not phrased right. lets just say I GOT A NEW FAVORITE!
    xox
    | Posted on 2005-12-18 00:00:00 | by crazzybeautiful | [ Reply to This ]
      It seems as though you've answered your own questions at the end of this piece. You are correct in saying that true love never dies... if one is capable of simply walking away, it was only momentary infatuation. As horrid as it may sound, I've done it to several men because I knew that I was not capable of loving them. Sure it hurt them, even has made them cry, but I'd rather be honest & move on then hurt them worse in the end. I enjoyed the honesty of this piece & it was well put together with the Q&A.
    ~Tonya
    | Posted on 2005-12-16 00:00:00 | by Tonya V. | [ Reply to This ]


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