Okay i could read what you were saying and i liked the poem. But honestly (don't worry about what's about to be said because i write about the same thing.) This topic is played out. Even though i still write these i'm tired of hearing about it...anyways it was good and the structure was right. I hope to read more.
wow this poem relly touchd i feel like im goin thru this right now cuz everytime i get close to this guy he seems to pull away n play little mind games n its not cool n this poem jus put alot of things that i was thinkin out in the open n i thank you for that. <3ash