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Vampire Hunter pt 2

Author: Poeticprincess
ASL Info:    18/f/Germany
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PT 2!!! FINALLY. oh and i pulled this one out of my ass so don't hate me lol. Anyways tell me what i did wrong, tell me what i did right. Tell me if you hated it, tell me if you loved it. Tell me anything just comment.

Vampire Hunter pt 2

3 years later

Gemini sighed as she sat down in chair. She was wearing a black tank top, black leather lowrise boot cut jeans and combat boots. Her hair was laying down her shoulders. Her feet and hands were bound and she was staring at two men wearing black buisness suits and black glasses. One of them smiled and bared is fangs while the other studied her.
"Do you know why your here?" the one smiling said in a italian accent.
Gemini thought about it before saying, " want to suck my blood?"
Both of them started laughing and said, "You're already a vampire doing that won't solve a thing."
"Then you must hate me for some reason, if not this was pointless."
"Oh, no hate you? Ha! you're not important, we're using you for bait."
Gemini looked at the one who had spoken blankly.
"Travis, she must not no." said the other.
"Hmmm you're right Armand, she must not...we then i'll explain. We know you've had some contact with Mystic, he who knows where the One who will birth the Ultimant evil. You are going to be our lure."
Gemini looked at him and said, "The Ultimant evil? As in the one who shall...make a pact with the devil the second time she dies. She will die three more times after that and will become resurected?"
"So you aren't stupid."
"No but you are."
Gemini smiled darkly, "Let's just say Armand and Travis, you'll never live to see the prophcey fulfilled."
The two looked at her and said, "You're one to make threats."
Gemini's nail grew longer and she cut the rope that bound her hands. She looked at them and shook her head.
"Actually," she said since they didn't notice the knife that was cutting the binds with her feet. "It's the other way around."
She stood up and smiled as the looked at her in shock then anger. The Travis lundged at her and she grabbed his neck pinning him against the wall. Smiling, she stuck her hand in his chest and pulled out his heart. As she bit into it blood stained the floor. When she threw the heart to the floor it crumbled to dust.
"You want to fight me too?" she asked Armand who was looking at her.
"I are powerful. I'll report it to Andrew."
Gemini froze and said, "Andrew."
"Yes, my master has been keeping tabs on you Riverina."
Gemini sighed before saying, "My name isn't Riverina anymore."
She walked out of the room as Armand made no move to stop her. She was going to get answers.

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