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    dots Submission Name: the lazy poem of memoriesdots
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    Author: blind.who.sees
    ASL Info:    15/f/RI
    Elite Ratio:    3.04 - 54/59/21
    Words: 208
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
    Total Views: 1478
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1472



    Description:
       well...this is a list of some inside jokes I had with my old friends...just felt like writing something about them cause I miss them so much.


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    dotsthe lazy poem of memoriesdots
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    There's something I want to say
    Hope you can hear from that far away

    So many memories
    So little time
    I remember them...
    Shit I can't find a rhyme

    This poem is a bit loose
    Ok, i admit it, it's totally lazy
    But when I remember I'm relaxed
    I never forget that we're totally crazy

    There's rain on my window
    How's the weather over there?
    You're so far, but I can hear
    You say "Can I touch your hair?"

    Strange people in a...
    Well...you know the rest
    At reciting that stuff
    We were definiely the best.

    Singing and running
    Yelling hippies all day
    Being posessed by the hundreds
    Woe sponges all the way!

    I thought you were gone
    then one day you were back
    you hit your head wth your flag
    you taught us the hip attack

    Tarot cards during Latin
    And your poke-able-ness
    I would spell your name wrong
    You'd say "no!" I'd say "yes!"

    For now I'm done
    these memories are strong
    they'll last for a while
    *sniker* our jokes are so wrong!

    It'll never be finished
    this list of our jokes
    it's too long to end it
    with a "that's all folks!"




    Submitted on 2005-12-16 07:03:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      except this has the most views. its all in the title. i wish we still has woe sponges. my gym teacher is evil and sadistic and... and...and so on. i'm suddenly appreciative of "its all coach g's fault" even though it is. B hasn't killed herself yet- which meand there's still hope. or there's Lord of the Rings on non stop. Pick one.
    Hey You
    | Posted on 2006-04-26 00:00:00 | by hey.you | [ Reply to This ]
      Well, I guess you said it yourself: the poem is lazy...and it is. What I don't understand is "why?" Why exactly is the poem lazy? Was it done on purpose or did you actually just keep adding stanzas in hopes of balancing out the laziness with length? Basically, the fact remains that when people don't put much thought into their work, they're not going to get a whole lot of genuine interest in it.
    | Posted on 2005-12-16 00:00:00 | by gavinspikenard | [ Reply to This ]



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