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    dots Submission Name: Screaming for all it's worthdots

    Author: Red_reaper
    ASL Info:    14/f/inside a blueberry
    Elite Ratio:    5.94 - 143/76/20
    Words: 77
    Class/Type: Rant/Serious
    Total Views: 832
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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       THe title got it pretty well, actually.

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    dotsScreaming for all it's worthdots

    We smile
    We cry
    We live
    We die

    I want to sing!
    I want to yell!
    I want to dance!
    I want to rebel!

    If you never really smile
    Then do you never really cry?
    If you never really lived
    Then do you never really die?

    Who will listen?
    Who will quiet?
    Who will join?
    Who will riot?

    Scream and Scream
    Who can tell?
    I might just stand here
    And yell and yell

    Submitted on 2005-12-16 15:18:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow this part:

    If you never really smile
    Then do you never really cry?
    If you never really lived
    Then do you never really die?

    is really good i love that
    if you make a whole poem with only really good stanzas like that instead of only one youd have
    such a great poem.
    good poem for peole to relate to,
    | Posted on 2006-01-22 00:00:00 | by ohgpanic | [ Reply to This ]
      This was a really good write I loved the third Stanza about the "If we never really Smile" "Do We Ever Really Cry" that whole thing was amazing the poem was short but I don't think u could of added anymore to it that would of made it better keep it up I really enjoy ur poems I might have to stalk u(that's kinda disturbing on if I wasn't talkign about on the site)

    | Posted on 2005-12-23 00:00:00 | by in_my_suffering | [ Reply to This ]
      If you never really lived
    Then do you never really die?>>

    I really loved this part of your poem. It is a great question to pose. I can relate to this.

    The piece was great. Not an epic poem to be read upon pages but it smells of the essence of what true poetry is.

    Good Write.
    | Posted on 2005-12-20 00:00:00 | by thetwilight | [ Reply to This ]
      hey i really liked this.. i'm feelin ya too.. i have been at this moment in my life as well.. i think everybody is at one point.. i love how u described it.. keep it up
    | Posted on 2005-12-16 00:00:00 | by soul full | [ Reply to This ]

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