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    dots Submission Name: The Sower Haiku (Bless U)dots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 14
    Class/Type: Haiku/Nature
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       A foggy but colorful day - Love,Peace,Joy~Feel,Experience,BE!!!

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    dotsThe Sower Haiku (Bless U)dots

    Sonburst * of Express
    The Sower & Winter Wheat
    Where sky & Land Meet

    Submitted on 2005-12-16 15:19:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Nice haiku, it was very visual. I tried haiku before. I can't get that type of visual. I see an ocean and the land past it being swallowed by a comfortable fog...I don't know...I'm weird O.o. Very nice! Take care!
    | Posted on 2006-01-12 00:00:00 | by Skinwalker | [ Reply to This ]
      A very nice haiku! You have expressed some wonderful imagery in such few words! I really enjoy reading your poems, and especially your nature poems. You are at one with "her". hee hee! Perfect form here and very well written. You have placed a lovely picture in my mind with this one. Very good stuff! Take care.

    | Posted on 2005-12-21 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]
      What a lovely thought - a colourful fog.

    Reminds me a little bit of old London Town, where there were milti-coloured fogs. A nice write - short and sweet.
    | Posted on 2005-12-19 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      beautiful Tiffany.. i love how you use "son" in this,
    for he is the sower, is he not?

    i was wondering why you didn't capitalize Sky...?
    just curious... about you!!


    | Posted on 2005-12-19 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh yes, this is perfect the star * and the & mark so much space in the idea here,

    most clever, butterfly, you get chimed!!

    excellent work Tiff, I don't know how you do these, but I enjoy having a peek..
    love and peace,

    | Posted on 2005-12-19 00:00:00 | by nansofast | [ Reply to This ]
      Terrirfic piece of work from you, Tiffany. I like the images you give in this and it works so well, just like haiku should. Nice.


    | Posted on 2005-12-17 00:00:00 | by joeyalphabet | [ Reply to This ]
      Great piece mam! Your first line is in five syllables. The next line has seven and the last line has five. Very impressive. I will try to write a haiku piece. My teacher in 7th grade made me write one and that is how I received my interest in poetry. Great work! I am looking forward to reading more of your works..
    | Posted on 2005-12-16 00:00:00 | by B-Gentle | [ Reply to This ]
      Pretty nice piece, i have wanted to try to do some haiku poetry myself. It is challenging to write in a style that allows so few words, but you have managed to write a good one.
    | Posted on 2005-12-16 00:00:00 | by Martin S. Allen | [ Reply to This ]
      Well now, there you go again, putting lovely images in my head . You're so good at that with your poems.
    The heavenly sower of winter wheat.
    Wheat and sky meeting. <- lovely picture

    I like the way you "see" things, and then express them to us in your writing.
    Your poems always have that "Tiffany" signature that we have all come to enjoy

    Very very nice! Lovely haiku!
    Happy Day to You
    | Posted on 2005-12-19 00:00:00 | by Intricate1 | [ Reply to This ]

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