Nice haiku, it was very visual. I tried haiku before. I can't get that type of visual. I see an ocean and the land past it being swallowed by a comfortable fog...I don't know...I'm weird O.o. Very nice! Take care!
A very nice haiku! You have expressed some wonderful imagery in such few words! I really enjoy reading your poems, and especially your nature poems. You are at one with "her". hee hee! Perfect form here and very well written. You have placed a lovely picture in my mind with this one. Very good stuff! Take care.
Great piece mam! Your first line is in five syllables. The next line has seven and the last line has five. Very impressive. I will try to write a haiku piece. My teacher in 7th grade made me write one and that is how I received my interest in poetry. Great work! I am looking forward to reading more of your works..