Very interesting prose. As a read it, differnt imagries popped into my head in a dizzying speed. I think my inerptation is probably much different than what you had in mind when you wrote it, but I like the flow of the words at how they took on their own life in the rythem of the piece. Nicely done ^_^
This is hard to understand, but i like the feeling it gives off, and because it goes with the song i'm listening too. so it's all good. I love this peom, i'm not to sure what the meaning is, i'll probally spend minutes reading it over and over. I'm guessing the meaning is...really random poem...but the meaning is a girl and she's done something, like something bad, or she's trying to get rid of memories, by burying it. then...i'm lost. comment me back on the meaning, i feel like i made a bad attempt at the meaning at all. please
Your writing is quite erm opaque to me, I have the damndest time trying to figure it out. I have my ideas about what this is about, but if you could shed some light that would be great. You really create a disturbing air with this so if that's what you were going for well done.
I'd say that to me it felt bleak, but I think bleak doesn't even start to cover it...I started off wondering if you had ever written any songs for the Pixies, then ended questioning life and why we all bother. Thanks...(I think)