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Author: Fraser
ASL Info:    26
Elite Ratio:    2.43 - 30 /55 /35
Words: 65
Class/Type: Poetry /
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i thought i would be interesting to write about a farmer and what farmers go through. The mind set of a farmer and how they deal with life.


A farmer
alone in his work
enters his field
stopping so often to hold the grain
seeing the tall blades swaying
calves swinging their tails
weather beaten horses trotting
there is a cold wind that chills him
he thinks of his father
battling the seasons
surviving the times
his strength is grand
the farmer thinks
and wishes for that strength

Submitted on 2005-12-16 17:52:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  i thought it was alright. it didn't really flow well cause the different lengths of lines and no rhyming and diff # of syllables. the content was good...i understood what you meant and such. it didn't have too much feeling..i couldn't feel bad or good or anything for the farmer you know? i just was kinda like wow that's an interesting point of view.
| Posted on 2005-12-16 00:00:00 | by beth freese | [ Reply to This ]

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