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holiday blues -------------------------------------------
when the relitives come
I feel like i m pushed to the side
I am used to this feeling it happenes every other month
I hide in my room
like a hermit crab that has lost its shell
like a fish out of water
that is why I hate it when the relitives come forthe holidays
relatives can suck on my left nut man, i know exactly how you feel, but for the peice here i'll say so much as its atleast straight forward lol. One or two metaphores, but i think you could do better if you took your time
Submission Name: holiday blues
