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    dots Submission Name: Mommy Loves Medots
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    Author: WindEmpress
    ASL Info:    15/f/meditating
    Elite Ratio:    3.15 - 95/124/44
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 176
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 540



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       I'm such an odd ball! This is for The Ring II after Samara got locked into the well. Why am I an odd ball? BECAUSE I CRIED WHEN SHE GOT LOCKED IN THE WELL! I feel better! Have fun!


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    dotsMommy Loves Medots
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    Mommy loves me
    It's easy to see
    When they asked who was my father
    She said don't even bother

    Mommy tried to drown me
    She said she wanted to set me free
    They took me away
    And I didn't even have a say

    Mommy doesn't love me
    Its too easy to see
    She pushed me into the well
    Making it look like I fell

    Mommy killed me
    She wanted to be free
    She closed the lid
    To forget what she did




    Submitted on 2005-12-17 12:36:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I hope when i die, i too can unleash a deadly curse upon the world.
    I liked this poem alot! I can understand why you cried when samara got locked up again.

    I was only said, because if i released a lethal curse, I'd hate for that to happen. I a bad person. HEHEHEHEHE
    | Posted on 2005-12-17 00:00:00 | by Red_reaper | [ Reply to This ]
      coooo Samara rocks. i hav a friend who looks just like her.well i didnt cry when samara got put bac in the well but it was quite sad
    poor samara
    that was an awsome poem if u rote ne more like this tell me

    Queen Darkness of the Grim Draco
    | Posted on 2005-12-17 00:00:00 | by darkness | [ Reply to This ]
      that was a very tough poem and i bet it took lots of emotions to put this piece together , the descriptions and the pain inside this poem is very deep. a job very well done.
    | Posted on 2005-12-17 00:00:00 | by Tarek Refaat | [ Reply to This ]



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