Beautiful! Being I am a Daddy's girl,,I fine this write with all the words I'd long to say to my Dad..I'm sure your Dad will love to get a copy or be read this poem by you Wonderful to be able to have that special bond...
You have touched on every dads bane. We raise our daughter from birth and we try to protect them from all harm. It is hard but we give it our best shot. This is great and I can almost feel the tears starting to swell. I hope you show this to you dad. I know for a fact that he would love it. I have 3 daughter and two of them have latched onto me for dear life. Now they are in collage and My heart breaks when I walk through the door and find the house empty.
Please read my writes about letting go. There are a number of them. My daughters have written poems here to answer mine.
Their names on here are idlewriter and fiery_eyes.
amazing. I love the flow and the rhymes but i found one mistake in it (not with the poem but the grammar) "The apple of his eye" "DADDY precious girl" I dont like when people put inconrrect grammar to make their poem sound good. Good Job Abbas