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    dots Submission Name: Sowingdots
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    Author: withblindedeyez
    ASL Info:    19/m/nc
    Elite Ratio:    2.57 - 83/121/58
    Words: 228
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Depressed
    Total Views: 736
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    Bytes: 1342



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       shit i wrote down fast


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    dotsSowingdots
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    Take another pill for pain
    Put a knife up to a vein
    To help cast aside my pains
    Burn the bridges of my past
    So I can lay me to rest at last

    And Iím far from
    Knowing where I am going,
    These scars that I am
    Bearing from your needles
    Where youíve been sowing,
    Your name across my heart,
    With every letter you know that
    You left me bleeding

    Throw another stone to ease my pain
    Take this gun and erase my name
    To get my mind out of this mind frame
    Burn the bridges of my past
    If you bring the matches Iíll get the gas.

    And Iím far from
    Knowing where I am going,
    These scars that I am
    Bearing from your needles
    Where youíve been sowing,
    Your name across my heart,
    With every letter you know that
    You left me bleeding

    I swear I tried to change
    From what I always was,
    But a part of me stayed the same
    You where the bridges that linked my past
    I know it wasnít me that changed at last.

    And I know where Iím going
    These scars Iím not carrying
    Take your needles and your game,
    Stick them in your veins
    Taste the poison, of your name






    Submitted on 2005-12-17 22:18:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      very good, heartfelt, crying inside kind of good...i like it alot...just want to say that if i'm getting the right point out of this that you should n't want to do something bad to yourself just because of one person being bad to you...there are plenty of other people that care too
    | Posted on 2005-12-20 00:00:00 | by tinkerbellsas | [ Reply to This ]


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