Description: My love, one and only has been hurt. I am going through a torment right now. i am helpless, nauseos, scared, tormented, and just I don't know what to do. If love overcomes distance why am I so far from helping her, and bringing her to peace.
Just Reach Out Your Arm -------------------------------------------
Running along the winding dirt path
laughing together, never looking back
Love so true, passion so strong
If it wasn't seen by one's eyes
They'd never know it was true
Sitting together, love and memories
Watching the streaks brighten the sky
Fear and amazement, seen through their eyes
A rumble from afar
a hellfire now
The innocent was was hurt
He coudn't say how
She was lost and is such pain
the earth beneath them divided
he was stolen away
Watching from so far away
he stands helpless now
She has the power, she has the means
she forgets that he loves her
he says what he means
It is up to her now, she must reach out her arm
His hand is a beacon, that will lead her from harm
She'll be saved from the hell
that she has been thrown into
It's all up to her
Just reach out your arm.
This is a lovely and very sad poem. Your words are so heartfelt and touching and this situation seems very distressing. I am not sure what happened here or why it caused a sort of separation in your relationship, but your sincerity is quite clear and you have done a wonderful job expressing your emotions in this poem. It is very well written and expressed. And I love the title and how you tied it in to the ending of your poem. Just reaching out is really a wonderful way to rekindle the closeness lost and the way you have said that it needs to come from her is very sad, but you have understanding that she must resolve within herself and make the first move. This is a very moving poem. Nice job. Take care.
I think this is the most sweetest poem that has ever been written.It is sad that sometimes when we want to help people out the most especially the ones that we love only they can help themselves.I liked how you explained the relationship in the beggining like how innocent it was .You don,t hear the word innocence in many love relationships.I also liked the way you used the hell fire as braking you two apart.It makes it seem that this thing that is overcoming her is trying to brainwash or manipulate her against you.Good write.Its going on the fav.